In this video clip, John Carlton explains how your presentation or your products or services needs to grab the attention of your prospect. This is point 13 of his Simple Writing System. His comments: The Headline:  Are you trying to take your business from $10 million to $250 million but can’t figure out why you’re not

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In an excerpt from the Action Seminar, John Carlton’s panel of expert copywriters critique a participant’s webpage, discussing the merits and limitations of using video for your pitch. Their comments: David Deutsch:  Yes, the skepticism is huge.  A little credentializing, something that lets me know either he’s unique or what he has to say is

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In an excerpt from the first Action Seminar, John Carlton’s panel of expert copywriters critique a participant’s webpage, discussing the how to create a personal voice in one’s writing. Their comments: And just reading your opening here, it sounds to me like you are trying to follow the rule of short sentences.  Because it is

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In this excerpt from the Action Seminar, Mike Koenigs describes his personal formulas for success in business. Success Formulas. OK. A couple of success formulas. Here is what I got from interviewing a lot of people for the movie. Number one is clarity of vision. Again, it is “Think and Grow Rich” material. Theater of

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